Friday, 6 June 2014

Success Recount

You are going to write a descriptive recount, telling our audience about a time you were successful.  Don’t forget you need to…
  • put things in order
  • use describing words
  • give lots of detail to paint a picture in the readers head
  • use  a hook
  • use powerful verbs
Describe a time we were successful

Yeah you! at was so amazing  when I walked into the classroom I was keen to go & do ms hard work in room 6 I was excited because I was going to a higher classroom I hope I can go to a harder classroom at will be awesome.   

yeah who! when  I walked into room 6 I was happy to go in and do some work


  1. Nice work keep the work up

  2. nice work bro keep the good work up